“THE STRUGGLE OF DEFORMED BOY”
One day, there were a deformed boy who wore the support of feet and
a girl in the forest. Suddenly, three boys who bike came and one of them threw
stones three times to the deformed boy intentionally until he fell down, then
the girl helped to get up him and asked him to run. But, they pursued him by
their bicycle, so he tried to run fast, although he toddled.
The miracle happened, his support of feet broke in pieces and he
could run fast like the normal human until they couldn’t pursue him again.
then the girl helped to get up him
BalasHapussorry Linda,, I think better if you write like this " then the girl helped him to get up"
Suddenly, three boys who bike came ... i think you can add ride so the meaning more clearly..
BalasHapusSuddenly, three boys who ride their bike came .