Kamis, 23 Oktober 2014

“SINGLE BOY”

       

          What’s up friends…!!! I have a good news for all of you who feel gloomy. Specially for single ladies or ladies who was hurth by her exboyfriend. Calm down, beibeh… ^_^ . There are still many man in the world, so move on… ladies, come on… hehehe. If you want to have a boyfriend soon, don’t worry ladies…!! . I’m going to promotion my friend who wants to make a relationship, because he’s single originally long time. Ok, check this out… ^_^
          He is my friend, when I was junior high school, his name is Josh. After graduating from senior high school, he looks for a job, and now he works in a restaurant as cashier. He has straight hair, long nose, thin lips, so he looks handsome, right… ? hihihi. He has dark skin, because he is Indonesian originally, hehehe….He was pretty short, because when I stood behind him, he was shorter than me, but now… Wooww amazing !!! When I met him two weeks ago, he is extremely tall. His body is thin, actually he really wants to have average weight, but he doesn’t get it, because he has disease in his body. It’s asthma. He is humouris, so he really likes to make jokes. He looks very kind because he often helps his friends, when they have problem.
          Yeah… that’s all about my friend. If you attracted, you can have deeper recognition with him. Thank you… ^_^

8 komentar:

  1. who was hurth = who was hurt
    long nose = pointed nose

    BalasHapus
  2. I absolutely agree ^_^...
    thanks a lot lili for your correction...

    BalasHapus
  3. i'm sorry, let me correct your writing
    who feel gloomy = who feels gloomy

    BalasHapus
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    1. I agree with you adzif....
      thanks your correction adzif... ^_^

      Hapus
  4. Linda...It's Interesting..But I think, If you omitted the comma after "my friend "on your sentence "He is my friend, when I was junior high school, his name is Josh" Is more correctly..He is my friend when I was junior high school,His name is josh.

    BalasHapus
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    1. I see you point, but independent clause is combined with an independent clause must use comma before....
      thanks vivi your suggestion.... ^_^

      Hapus
  5. sorry, i think "thin lips" is not suitable be better you can say "small lips" or sexsy lips" heee :)
    because if thin more suit with body.

    BalasHapus
  6. hehehehe.... I really agree with you anis...
    thanks for your suggestion....

    BalasHapus